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Haiku melt
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Haiku natural and synthetic As the heat melts ice
The nature of your love told
Your eyes form ice storms
A seed under ice
Is still a seed of hope
Belief must not thaw
Spring brings with it love
lovers refresh sighs and longing
Still winter for us
Dry bones weep for flesh
Love compels sustenance
nourishments denied
Wanton nights pleasure
Lust clears by day breaks fading
Light shows my folly
Sweet bird sings of love
At night the song seems sweeter
By day the croak jeers
This is FANTASTIC! Very
This is FANTASTIC! Very impressive. I like the pattern that the inidividual poems create: three Haiku, then two Senryu, and then a concluding Haiku. This is an excellent reading experience.
Starward
Thank you so much for your
Thank you so much for your comments they lifted my energy. Yes you called it exactly, this is what makes your comment so compelling and pertinent for me. Truly thanyou for your kind and learned appreciation. Cheerss
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
And thank you for your kind
And thank you for your kind reply.
Starward
This is very well written and
This is very well written and unique. I really like the style you chose, haikus can be fun
Thank you for stopping by.
Thank you for stopping by. All forms are a joy for me. The describing... yes sonmany ways to resonate and appreciate.
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."