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Spinoza commented on: Cassiopeia A by Spinoza 33 weeks 6 days ago
You are yourself a super-star:   You are yourself a super-star. This site needs more people of your spirit around. We could all work off each others synergy, and build our temples into the heavens.
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GabulousGabby commented on: Cassiopeia A by Spinoza 33 weeks 6 days ago
Thanks ☺️ : Thanks ☺️ 
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patriciajj commented on: Desolate and Perfect Now by patriciajj 33 weeks 6 days ago
Thank you again and again for: Thank you again and again for that breathtaking encapsulation of my expression. Always honored by your presence, gifted Poet.   
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patriciajj commented on: Cassiopeia A by Spinoza 33 weeks 6 days ago
This striking personification: This striking personification of an astronomical event has an ecstatic vastness, an escalating grandeur, that is not simply read, but experienced. Few poets could tackle such an ambitious theme, but you pulled it off with startling prowess.   "she threw her stardust   across the Milky Way   and said goodbye in a vault of light"  Off-the-charts beauty here!   Your use of white space and ravishing metaphors amid the mind-blowing facts creates the ultimate poetic voyage. Still reeling and loving it!   Supersized brilliance.    
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patriciajj commented on: Yet [*/+/^] : 27.225 MHz, Some Final Measures; Galilean Farewell by J-C4113d 33 weeks 6 days ago
And thank YOU for being the: And thank YOU for being the embodiment of graciousness and talent. Be forever blessed.  
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Spinoza commented on: Cassiopeia A by Spinoza 34 weeks 47 min ago
Enjoy and keep posting:   Looking forward to seeing you around more. Enjoy the reading around here and keep posting.
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Wild_heart commented on: Blank by Wild_heart 34 weeks 50 min ago
thank you!: thank you!
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Codé commented on: Blank by Wild_heart 34 weeks 1 hour ago
definitely connecting with: definitely connecting with this one, especially that first stanza... dimly elegant  in its brevity and simplistic approach on stagnation, a sense of dread, or even feeling trapped you might add.
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Spinoza commented on: Desolate and Perfect Now by patriciajj 34 weeks 1 hour ago
everlasting – and full of possibility:   Me, I see an ominous night with dark tendrils reaching down from the sky, while hope floats away from the observer like gossamer on a wild torrent of wind – as an all-encompassing powerful storm moves in. It is coming to sweep everything away. The cast-iron despair – is the end of all things. While the counterfeit joy is a sober peace – in letting go of the entire mirage of hope… embracing the soundless opera of an icy symphonic tomb – only to be absorbed as a tiny spectacle of dust by God and the Cosmos – which is in fact, everlasting – and full of possibility.    
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J-C4113d commented on: Yet [*/+/^] : 27.225 MHz, Some Final Measures; Galilean Farewell by J-C4113d 34 weeks 2 hours ago
Thank you very much for that: Thank you very much for that comment.  John's Gospel was much in my mind when I was contemplating, than writing, the poem.  And I am grateful for your compliment as well.  Although the body is failing, and causing pain as it fails, the poems help me to remain joyous, and to feel like I am still living, rather than just merely existing.  Thanks again for your kind comment.
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Spinoza commented on: Yet [*/+/^] : 27.225 MHz, Some Final Measures; Galilean Farewell by J-C4113d 34 weeks 2 hours ago
Reminds me a great deal of John 14:2-3:   You’re at the peak of ripeness here my friend. Patricia said it well. A story of a man with a foot in two worlds – waiting to transcend … with the lapping waves keeping pace with an old man’s breathing (images of a Galilee shore come to mind here), in a place where neither fear nor nightmare disturbs the peace and acceptance of the moment, knowing it is but a simple journey into the Lord’s embrace, much in alignment with the way that Jesus must have felt, on that final evening supper with his disciples.   Reminds me a great deal of John 14:2-3   “My Father’s house has many rooms; if that were not so, would I have told you that I am going there to prepare a place for you? And if I go and prepare a place for you, I will come back and take you to be with me that you also may be where I am.
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J-C4113d commented on: Not a Poem but Poetic by Spinoza 34 weeks 2 hours ago
I applaud the brilliance of: I applaud the brilliance of your theology.
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Wild_heart commented on: neglected yet by humanfruit 34 weeks 2 hours ago
De fucking France!!  love: De fucking France!!  love that
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J-C4113d commented on: Partiya Lenina, Sila Narodnya by J-C4113d 34 weeks 5 hours ago
Thank you, Sir.  And, always: Thank you, Sir.  And, always at the bottom of the pile of excrement, lurks the nefarious Lenin with his baleful glare and his insidiously bloodthirsty need for vengeance.  I remember reading one that the philosopher and socialist, Bertrand Russell, after meeting him, remarked at how delightedly Lenin spoke not only of brutal executions but of the immediate sufferings of those who were being executed.  I think it was as if the entire Soviet Union had been constructed by Lenin as his personal vengeance machine.  (And then again, having to wake up to Krupskaya's horse-face every morning must have further antagonized his mean streak.)
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J-C4113d commented on: Yet [*/+/^] : 27.225 MHz, Some Final Measures; Galilean Farewell by J-C4113d 34 weeks 5 hours ago
You already known, and have: You already know, and have known for a couple of years, how much I esteem the grandeur of your cosmic Poetry, and how much I value your comments on this poem.  And this particular comment reigns supreme over all the comments with which you have blessed my poems.  Reading this, and then trying to write a response, reminds me of something that Wallace Stevens told a nun, Sister Bernetta Quinn, who had become one of his most perceptive readers and commentators---about how her comments meant to him not only on the literary level, but on a personal level that most other comments could not reach.  That is how your comments work, as well:  they touch my soul, and this particular comment has done that supremely. I am very glad you chose this poem to comment upon, because your comments become, for me, as sort of validation.  I rank you among the great Poets whom I most deeply and personally admire, and when you affix a comment to one of my poems it comes from that very realm where the stars are. Because I happen to believe that I am in the final stages of my life, regardless of how long or how little those stages might last, I wanted to write a farewell poem, the way Stevens did when he wrote, for example, "The Planet On The Table."  Because I love and admire the Early (and Earliest) Christians so much, I wanted to write from, and within, the world on earth that they knew; primarily, Galilee, where Jesus walked and to which He returned after His Resurrection when He shattered, forever, the power of death upon us.  And, from a practical motive, I wanted to write a poem that I can try to recall, or even read, when my own time comes---if I can retain my right mind when that time comes. Thanks, again, for taking the time to read this poem and for putting your comment upon it.  Your interpretation is, as usual, very accurate, and very observant of the way the poem is intended to work, and I appreciate it.  But what I appreciate even more is the shrewd and confident spiritual/cosmic perspective that lives, thrives, and resonates within your poems, your comments, and . . . I most heartily believe . . . your entire life as a Poet.
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