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wisdomscry commented on: Don't Follow Your Heart by wisdomscry 40 weeks 1 day ago
   Thank you. Blessings.  :    Thank you. Blessings.  
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lyrycsyntyme commented on: SYNTACTICAL GYMNASTICS by georgeschaefer 40 weeks 1 day ago
It's hard to learn a foreign: It's hard to learn a foreign language at your age, my friend. ; )
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lyrycsyntyme commented on: In HIs Eyes by tattooedangel192007 40 weeks 1 day ago
There are rare people who can: There are rare people who can come along and help someone see themselves in a truer light. I hope you hold onto what's been shown to you, all your life.
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S74rw4rd commented on: THANKFUL FOR OPEN MINDS by joy 40 weeks 1 day ago
This poem should be read to: This poem should be read to one of our country's political candidates who is now trolling to secure a nomination.
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S74rw4rd commented on: Nikki Haley Not For President! by ramonathompsont 40 weeks 1 day ago
Would you mind to explicate: Would you mind to explicate your use of monarchical terms in the third line?  Just askin' . . . 
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ramonathompsont commented on: THE GIFT OF AN OPEN MIND by joy 40 weeks 1 day ago
my husband really needs to: my husband really needs to read this one. he has become so close minded lately. very troubling
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beaconzbard commented on: You Are All I Have. by beaconzbard 40 weeks 2 days ago
It's now on YouTube: You can now watch/hear me read this one at:  https://youtube.com/shorts/hn3BG_Nj9z8
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georgeschaefer commented on: THANKFUL FOR OPEN MINDS by joy 40 weeks 2 days ago
You can and should learn: You can and should learn something new everyday if you have an open mind
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Teytonon commented on: Remember by prboggs 40 weeks 2 days ago
I enjoyed reading your commentary..: I enjoyed reading your commentary Your advice is anything but rotten Unfortunately for me, you see Less than five minutes later, it was forgotten   I have problems with my memory Did anything important happen in December? I'm bad at remembering to forget But good at forgetting to remember   By the way, I thought you might find this interesting. I was looking at your name. If you take your name and scramble the letters, you can come up with the following:  PAULETTA RUBY BOGGS = G, GOT BLUS? U BETA PRAY!
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prboggs commented on: Remember by prboggs 40 weeks 2 days ago
I am an ordained Metropolitan: I am an ordained Metropolitan Bishop, and I am here to share positive, uplifting thoughts and energy with honest, decent people 
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beaconzbard commented on: FOR I AM TRULY FORGIVEN by beaconzbard 40 weeks 2 days ago
It's now on YouTube: You can now watch/hear me read this one at:  https://youtube.com/shorts/mbjNTyxnR6E
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S74rw4rd commented on: @ 27.055 MHz: Ad Astra; Neaniskos And Ahitophel, Officer Of The Temple Guard by S74RW4RD 40 weeks 3 days ago
Thank you so much for: Thank you so much for commenting on this, and for understanding what I was trying to accomplish.  This story came to me in a flurry last night, and I was up from three in the morning to almost six trying to put it together.  I decided not to cite Biblical sources, as such notes might disrupt either the flow of the poem, or collide with its effect if the reader looked through any attached notes.   Your acceptance, as you know, gives the poem a full validation and I will keep it as is, without further adjustment or alteration.  Thanks again for taking the time to read it and comment.
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patriciajj commented on: @ 27.055 MHz: Ad Astra; Neaniskos And Ahitophel, Officer Of The Temple Guard by S74RW4RD 40 weeks 3 days ago
Your tightly packed epics are: Your tightly packed epics are always a joy to dive into. Brief and swift compared to a short story, this poem is so emotionally intense and historically intriguing that it could be a masterclass in compressed drama with a crucial, underlying message.     Some might believe that all captivating ideas for stories woven around Biblical events have been exhausted, but leave it to you to discover an opening for a hard-hitting, deeply satisfying scene; one that fits so gracefully into the timeline that it feels authentic, compelling, very much like the narration in the excellent story you pay homage to.   While some short stories take several paragraphs to construct a believable and engaging character, I felt like I knew the genial, multidimensional, Divinely blessed yet adorably shy Neaniskos in a few lines.   But it wasn't the youth or fleeting physical attributes of the character that brought him to life, it was his soft and beautiful aura displayed in small actions such as gently touching the centurion's arm. The unforced, natural calm of one character acted as a foil for the understandable indignation of the other and together, it worked.   A deeply emotional and richly allusive micro story worthy of its monumental setting.  
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Wordman commented on: A Night On The Porch by Wordman 40 weeks 3 days ago
When words paint a picture: When words paint a picture that jostles a memory, either true or perceived, tears well, or smiles are born, and both the author and reader find the purpose of those words, their meaning, and their worth. Thank you Starward for finding such worth in my words, I appreciate your time and visit Sir.  
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beaconzbard commented on: ALL OF THIS GRIME, AND ALL THE RUST by beaconzbard 40 weeks 4 days ago
It's now on YouTube: You can now watch/hear me read this one at:  https://youtube.com/shorts/G4QlyA5lICc
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