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Who are you?
I can't quite see.
Do you wear that mask intentionally?

Are you friend or, are you foe?
I would really like to know.

Come a little closer,
so I can see.
Are you who you seem to be?

Author's Notes/Comments: 

In attempting to identify who is behind the masks of life.

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last updated 4 November 2010 - 9:33pm
©27 March 2009 - 2:19pm — vjochum
23 June 2021 - 10:37am — allets
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12 Years Ago

And still valid! ~S~

 

 

12 June 2015 - 3:24pm — deepinyourdreams
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I liked it'

I liked it'

"Deepinyourdreams"

12 June 2015 - 3:28pm — vjochum
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awww thank you!  How kind of

awww thank you!  How kind of you.

12 June 2015 - 3:18pm — Carcass
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Amazing flow and clever use

Amazing flow and clever use of words.  I really enjoyed this short poem!

12 June 2015 - 3:21pm — vjochum
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Thank you for the read.  :)

I wrote it while lookin into a mirror.   lol

27 March 2009 - 2:26pm — Afzal Shauq (not verified)
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wow soo sweet poem is this ..really like it very much..realistic, and rich idea.. well done

11 July 2020 - 12:04am — allets
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Relentlessly

may you discover their identities soon...to share with us. Ta da! It's us! :D. ~S~

 

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