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BITTERSWEET MOMENT
Thoughts of you illuminate my spirit.
Never with a flickering flame,
but with Arching Bolts, striking
with a force that disturbs my equalibrium.
My mind races, as waves of passion flush my pale skin,
causing me to gaze upon visions
of impossible romantic possibilities.
Pathetic is the woman who anticipates the true rhythm
of love with a man she may never hold.
My imagined discourse of thoughts leave me suffering.
My lips begin to quiver, with the words I may never speak;
...... held for now, until then,......
"I have loved you more than you can ever know."
Good gosh. I swear your talking about my damn life. Thats my lifes sad stoy. I love it Val. You get a hug for that one and a "Aint that true" finger snap and foot stomp.
Dani
Passionetepoet
Terrific writing. You pulled the reader in and took us along with you as you wrote of your emotions. Wonderful work. Remember...if it was meant to be...it will be.
Beautiful piece of writing!
So many women I think experience this. It is sad to be trapped in love with one who can never really appreciate true love. This piece to is very good to me.
This is the perfect poem for my mood.....you have a real winner here. This poem is so well written and so very smooth. I love it. Michelle
Highly beautiful poem replete with pathos and sweet anguish. It is not the case of a woman only but also the same situation may be of the man who becomes so pathetic and pitiable when he loves a woman he may never hold. The title of the poem "bittersweet moment" is very striking.
So your a hopeless romantic too!! hehehe, i luved this poem its a typical romance poem reinvented. Very good!
So beautiful and so sad...i felt like weeping with this one...kind of a love not returned back or forbidden love of some sort...if somebody caused in real life so much pain...i think that person was a real dummy...and maybe not worth of your love or tears my dear Val.Love the poem in all its sadness and romanticism...you are great! Love, your friend, Dorian
Aaaawww..a lovely poem. Short but oh so exquisitely done. I am impressed, as always Valerie. Smilesz. The ending is most aptly penned, captured the turmoil of feelings very well. Do read my Bittersweet. And tell me what u think of it..SMilesz. thanxs~!!
Perfection!! Short and sweet. Each words imprinting on the readers mind, inticing them to the climax of it, but yet savoring every beautiful word. You get the top 5 thumbs up babe. ughhhhhhhhhhh great!!!!
Good writing!! I love it! Cool poem!
a wonderful piece of writing....