A PLACE FOR YOU

I made this space for you my friends,

to share your thoughts, which can amend

the hearts of others or of your own,

I hope you make yourself at home.

----------------------------------------------------------



Within my heart I've made a space especially for you

A place for you to rest your head and wait for sorrows to pass

Within this space I hold a treasure, the special love of Tao

A gift not given for me to hoard, I must spread it all around.

--------------------------------------------------------------


Author's Notes/Comments: 

Written for all who join.

View vjochum's Full Portfolio
krnrana's picture

So much thanks to reply!

So thanks, How is your health? We are all stay at home. Here cronavirus is increasing day by day but thanks God than other countries here a little bit. We are all pray to God for the whole world and every person. Tell me about your family and country more please.

 

I created Youtube channel to post my poem. I have composed some poems and upload on my channel. In the following I am sending you My channel Link. Please see and subscribe. So much thanks.

 

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VmJ5whQ-tEo

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7A4Hby7tHoU

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=b9u0om_Phxo

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Hd-snwcLp3g

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gD65RgHMmS4

 

Rab Nawaz Khan (R. N. Khan)

 


Rab Nawaz Khan

Rawalpindi

Pakistan

vjochum's picture

Thank you

I am in New York.

Worst place possible at this time. 

No worry if you will just stay away from others, stay home, 

And stay constantly clean and let this pass.

 

krnrana's picture

Hi

Hi, we are all woried about cronavirus. I pray to God save us and the whole world from disease. How are you? What condition in your area? here lock down and we are all in home.

Rab Nawaz Khan


Rab Nawaz Khan

Rawalpindi

Pakistan

krnrana's picture

Dear Valerie Jochum, I think

Dear Valerie Jochum, I think it is an excellent piece of poetry. Nothing can be more precious and peaceful commodity that a loving heart in the whole universe. It has such a vast space and great treasure that even GOD, ALMIGHTY Who is the creator of the whole universe looks for a loving heart and furtively resides therein to amass a great deal of pleasure. Thank you so much for sharing such a nice and pretty poem.

=========================================================

Above comented person on you poem has died in 2019. He was my best friend and spend much time together. So he is not in our life. I know he is also best friend of you and many times he told me about you and also remember in good words.


Rab Nawaz Khan

Rawalpindi

Pakistan

vjochum's picture

Reading

Thank you for your kind words. 

Yes I learned of Afzals death sin after his passing from other mutual friends/writers.

He was a good loving soul here on earth.

Very much missed and remembered. 

 

Valerie

Afzal Shauq's picture

yeah i believe your composition of your loving words that you have much spce in your kind heart for friends to feed heartiest feelings... well done dear friend..love your poems and making me happy when read through...

Ra66it Jumpsfar's picture

Assembled...

I wish too steal his unwanted breath
My teeth clench for more than such simple forgotten death
I'll find his clumsy unrelenting pain so to arise far in depth
You touched soft tears, now my mind twists to turn your tears into an unplayable worthless grasp for a wished priceless dept
I’ll rip your screams from prayer of hope for me to stop
Razors meet you lids assuring to foreseen her pain I’ll give you day to day and always top
Cold hangers under skin new found puppet
Blood transfusion for life not ready to die, spill old blood in a reminding bucket
You fucked with the wrong girl
Now cries loud muted by my busy hand at intestinal warming twirl
You don’t know the way death works
You don’t even compare thoughts of your to my sickening infractions for you that larks
I want to see you fall to death faster than love at loss
I wish to hold your mother and show her my ravaging thoughts of her with an anal buried tortures cross
My fists are naked from your soft face
Head beaten to soft mushy scattered bone, blood hit my lips I still miss the taste
You told her to die but you wish for my slow death instead
When word found my talents that now catch you asleep in your new deathbed
Super gluing orifices don’t want to make a mess
Such tears I’ll wipe for you to see the my death is an endless test
Mans best friend tastes fresh cuts with cold damp salty Tongue Oh yah I forgot to tell you your mother said good bye if you want she’s in the back tightly strung, blue lips tasted better dangling ornament displayed and hung
I poked a hole in you fathers face
With a screw driver I found along the way, I poked and poked and a settling pace
Ok so I’ll start at your feet
New chain on wondering saw, stay still fuck you in for a graceful treat
Done, now at the knee
Your mother has the same scream but im not setting you free
Clinging and drilling my way to assemble your body
Don’t forget you grandmother oh never mind that was two days ago she lays still in pungent flesh half past rotting
She lays asleep right now thinking im at home
But you hit the wrong girl and soon now she too will here you moan
Aspirin freeing blood clots keep your happy forgetful hart
Your beautiful now for I fix you perfect alive and torn apart
You were fast for words that you probably didn’t mean
You said exactly what my hand craved to fenn
Well go to go hold my only reason for life
Hey wait a minuet I owe her for leaving me for your tears called love I couldn’t give her then
But you don’t understand I couldn’t feel as you all do, oh shit it's almost ten
Let her see why I hate her too
She loves me now, you know she hurts me cause of you, wait I know,
I know exactly what to do
I’ll bind thread to put you back together and for one last time I’ll show her to you
Ok four bags to heavy
Her house around the endless block
Sitting out side assembling you faster and faster time is at tock
Needle to thread needle to thread
In through her open window, my pleasant pillow that awaits my place to dread
Slip you in comfort
Be silent you'll wake her, when she awakes you all will see the reason why I endlessly hurt
She’ll see why I hate you for taking my dreams and life
I cry and cried fuck love your frail feeling when she wakes she'll find nothing more but my thoughts of why she left me for her new love all cause you called her your wife
How about you can you tell me why she decided to love me as she walked away?
Now your love has a new form and you live for that day by day
So fuck you both this is one true feeling the unlike love will stay
I bid my dire love farewell
I must not go on in love
Maybe one night I’ll find you, and hold my reason for awaking
So clench you husband, as he lay to remind you of all you stole and will always keep taking...

Ps good work, oh ya i was just alittle mad sorry but you shoul go and read some of my poetry well see you...

_Yours Truly, Ra66itJumpsfar...

James Booker's picture

This touches my heart...More than you will ever know.

*~* Slendah*~*'s picture

This is so sweet. I can tell from your bio that you are a very friendly, kind-hearted person. God bless you.

Corey Fox's picture

thank You! i have never put it in words but i feel the same. one love Corey & co

Ozjan Yeshar's picture

~Waiting~

I have waited long for
Your gardenia fragrance
To break inside my soul
And set my pain free.

I have waited for
Your spring colors
To awaken my dreams
But you were an iceberg in a cold sea

I have waited for
Your silky touch
Tickling my heart softly
And feeling you once again
Belonging to me
I have waited for
Your passionate rain
To shower my garden
But you certainly
Have lost my garden key

vjochum's picture

Hi Ozjan

Hopefully this reply reaches you and you will be linked to your beautiful poetry once again.  ♥️

Danielle Edwards's picture

I know i critique this already. But dammit I love it!!
Dani
Passionetepoet

ugonna's picture

Love and friendship make the world humane and uplifting. Beautiful, hopeful piece, Valerie! In "A PLACE FOR YOU", what Valerie has courageously done is to let us into the realms of a loving and caring heart where we emerge wholly refreshed. The following lines are touching and full of subtle meaning: "Within my heart, I have made a space especially for you A place for you to rest your head and wait for sorrows to pass..." Let us them learn, with Valerie, to say to those in need, in this troubling world: There is "A PLACE FOR YOU". Ugonna Wachuku

Daphne Sullivan's picture

Thank-you. This is beautiful.

iqbalar's picture

Dear Valerie Jochum, I think it is an excellent piece of poetry. Nothing can be more precious and peaceful commodity that a loving heart in the whole universe. It has such a vast space and great treasure that even GOD, ALMIGHTY Who is the creator of the whole universe looks for a loving heart and furtively resides therein to amass a great deal of pleasure. Thank you so much for sharing such a nice and pretty poem.

Danielle Edwards's picture

Ok now im jealous, lol. Your words always seem to be on point!! Dammit, you know it was good , i dont even have to tell you!!

Ali Saad's picture

Your invitation is warmly received with an open heart of consideration and respect...looking forward to read more of your poems Ali

Deborah  Russell's picture

This is the nicest invitation anyone could send, the best gift anyone could offer. May you have many returns. Thank you...