she, the one i truely miss
she, is the one who did this
she, gave me this mess
she, never did what said
and here i am wasting away
trying to make it out someday
still i've fallen down
and i feel so alone
she told me she loved me
then started to care
she said she couldn't
get more near
and i wonder what i've done
i wonder when i'll have fun
written in a simply style
but hits the mark...
Nice, yeah
~Christina~
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I can really relate to the words that flow thru this wonderful piece you wrote. Words that are true to the heart can touch deeply. Thank you for sharing your words with me. Hope you check mine out as well. Have a wonderful day.