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Works From a Lifetime Ago I think the world is turning against me.
The lights are dimming and I just can't see.
All the demons are over taking me.
I'm not sure how to make them disappear
But I know that my heart is full of fear,
Dear God, why have you pierced my heart with a spear?
What have I done to deserve this mad life?
I wish I could just stop it with a knife.
I don't care about being someone's wife
All I want in life is to be happy
Not to live with someone who is yappy
Who won't even let me take a little nappy.
I pray for angels to take me away
And not leave me here to rot and decay
Because all I want is to be okay
But I am about to go through the floor
If these people continue to ignore.
Just tell me is this too much to ask for?
This is a poem that I could really relate to in so many ways, except for the part where I'm not someone's wife, but as someone who is trying to live his own life. But then again, this poem is a poem that I could really relate to in so many ways. Good one!! =)
It actually seemed quite morrissey-esque, which i liked, a lot. Nice poem =)
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Really good poem, this is EXACTLY how I feel about life sometimes too :) whether that's good or not..I can't tell you but..people tell me life gets better..when and how..I can't tell you that either..because I still am waiting for this time of my life..hope these people are right..if not I guess I'm fucked for eternity..
this is really good. well i just wanted to say that you wrote "b/c i just want to be okay" i know you didnt mean it like that, but lol remember ok?
Loved this poem.
And in answer to Crystal (somewhere above), life definitely DOES get better - I have gone from being a depressed anorexic alcoholic Heroin addicted self-harming insomniac to someone who is now free from all those 'ailments'. The cure, for me at least, was finding true love!
Good luck.
Alisha x