i lay here
alone in the dark
i am bleeding
from my cold shallow heart
my tears fall
as i wipe them away
i am hopeless
i am scarred and affraid
can you help me
will you turn on the lights
will you stay here
i cant open my eyes
am i crazy
will you stay here with me
can you help me
i an down on my knees
begging you please
come and save me
from this painful rapeing
am i blind
i cant see
am i dead
i cant breath
cut this rope
its killing me
take this knife
my wrist bleeds
im watching the blood fall
in my mind i see it all!
Very natural emotion, the entire poem flows really well. It's easy to keep pace with an understanding of the pain.
I hope your feeling better these days.
I would rate this 5 out of 5.
I understand this one because I've been there. And you know without my saying that I'm always there for you as well