THE WISHING WELL
(T. Beechey)
As I saw folks journey to the wishing well,I heard everyone tell their greatest wish
"Ambition and power" "The love of a girl" "To rule the world with a swordful swish"
One by one,each penny was dropped with a plop,they rippled the watery blue
And,though the wishers knew nothing bloomed,each assumed their wish came true
The wishing well gave them a sign
Maybe divine,perhaps a key
To free them all from whatever bound
So,at last,they found a reason to be
As I witnessed folks pass by the wishing well,I heard them tell their heart's desire
"A higher status in life" "Diamonds and gold" "Untolled riches from an endless supplier"
One by one,each penny submerged into the turgent depths of the liquid abyss
And,regardless of whether their wish evolved,each wisher solved his personal miss
All day long they came and went,each with the intent to aspire
That somehow got mired along the way,some might say by their own desire
Whatever the reason they sought release,to cease the pains of their pricate hells
And,as tears welled in their collective eyes,they yearned reprise through the wishing well
As I watched folks go to the wishing well,I heard each tell their loftiest dream
"A winning team" "A ten-room mansion" "All the latest fashions right to the seam"
One by one each penny was sunk,eternally dunked in this well of hope
And,while,no promises were fulfilled,yearnings were stilled so all could cope
The wishing well provided relief
From the throes of grief and the wrath of despair
They became aware,each one that wished
In addition to hope,God was there
All night long beneath the stars,from far and near and south and north
They journeyed forth with fists enclosed and,inside of those,was their life's worth
Everything that ever mattered within the tatters of their crumbled shells
And,as tears welled in their collective eyes,they yearned reprise through the wishing well
As I ventured up to the wishing well my penny fell,just as others before
Pouring up with a tiny splash in amongst the cash on the stony floor
I closed my eyes and offered thanks,anxious to have my gratitude
Viewed by He who knitted themes from mislaid dreams and interludes
An excellent description of the variety of wishes at the well, and the conclusion is good and strong. This is a magnificent poem, but make it even greater by changing "He" in the last line to "Him." More properly English that way.
Starward