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Fireflies
Even the fireflies, realize...
how much you love me.
I didn't believe them,
when they told me.
I thought ~ no, no, all lies.
Yet, they flitter around us, still...
leaving thier soft glow upon our souls.
I couldn't know how much it showed until...
they chose to enlighten,
illuminate, dilate, radiate, elate...my emotional state.
Your sighs, fireflies, your sighs, fireflies...
This is a beautiful poem Geneva. I like your style of writing, very interesting. The last line is beautiful, rhyming with fifth line, which is a unique rhyming scheme. Keep up the good work.
Very nice thoughts.
Hi Geneva.... this has a different style of writing to it..and wow, very refreshing. Romantic, with tints of the feelings of realization that the devotion is so deep indeed. I like this~!!! ps: do check out the critiques for my poem, Everyone of u.
I like this poem! Very interesting! WEll written! ~ash