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Outside, looking in.
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From the outside looking in,
I can see her make a choice,
Wrong and hurting her within,
Yet fear restrains my voice.
I see another, who, in turn,
Is wandering into nowhere,
Pressing through the mists of darkness,
I can't tell him that I care.
From the outside looking in,
Who knows if the smiles are real,
They could all be burning inside,
Do I know how they truly feel?
Am I true to myself?
Is my outside what's within?
I always wonder what people see...
On the outside, looking in.
spell the word truly right and you have an amazing poem... actually, it's amazing even with the wrong spelling... haha. i love the way you're able to express yourself. wish i had that talent. =)