Angel face, speak with me,
Angel face, i need to see,
Show me light, tell me spirit,
speak nice and clear, so i can hear it,
help me breathe, i need to feel
help me feel, so i can feel real
Angel face, speak no more,
Angel face, with love I shall sore.
Tia Marie Thompson
Okay I really liked this one,
Okay I really liked this one, so don't take this the wrong way.. with a few little tweaks this piece could really really stand out!
Lol i wrote this poem sooo
Lol i wrote this poem sooo long ago i would definately love to hear wat u would suggest :) i think i wrote this in 2005 wen my uncle was murdered....that was a very emotional time for me n it seems like thats wen i have most of my inspiration is wen im hurt