I've Met This Girl (better copy)

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I've Met This Girl (better copy)

I've met this girl online,
and she makes me feel
like I am her number one!

She makes me feel
as if I am on cloud nine!
How can she make me feel this way?

I've met this girl online,
and she makes me feel
like I am her number one!

I am always eager
to get back online,
in hopes that she and I can talk.

I've met this girl online,
and she makes me feel
like I am her number one!

I love talking to her,
and want to be her's.
She's been appearing in my dreams.

I've met this girl online,
and she makes me feel
like I am her number one!

I want to be around her,
I want to meet her!
I want to see her offline!

I've met this girl online,
and she makes me feel
like I am her number one!

Author's Notes/Comments:

I know the other poem was pretty horrible, the one with the same title, but I was just splirting out crap, lol. Please let me know what you think of this poem! Huggs!

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6 August 2012 - 3:31am — MatthewWayne

wow I really do enjoy this

wow I really do enjoy this updated version!! :) and as always never stop writing!

"I am my own sort of strange, a supernova of madness and brillance. Forced to share the same space and time. Sane enough to not be seen, yet not crazy enough to be heard." -- Matthew Wayne

8 August 2012 - 3:21pm — thisisme789