Rainy Night

Rainy night.
You and I in a different world,
we were one, you and I on --
that rainy night.

Thoughts have left me awake
night and day,
thinking of you,
that rainy night.

Fingers intertwined,
breaths mingled,
our flesh became one,
oh that daring night,
that rainy night.

Months have passed,
years will pass,
but my thoughts will still be on --
that rainy night.

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Fitzgerald's picture

This is an amazing piece of

This is an amazing piece of art... awesome

Esaelp's picture

Never forget

This is beautiful. I agree that it is bittersweet. I can see a "meaning" in it. Thank you and keep writing.

toobuena's picture

Rainy night...

Simply lovely...:)...and a little bittersweet...:)

the-experimenter's picture

Thank you for the feedback.

Thank you for the feedback. It really means a lot to me.