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To My Perfect Paramour
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Volume Two To My Perfect Paramour
ACT I
Her voice was that of an Angel's choir,
I could see the joy, pain and sorrow trapped behind her eyes
to become lost within them forever, I'd die within the eternal fire
to have become powerless within your gaze, and hopeless within your arms
I fall prey to your lips and victim to your charms.
Crawling I beg for more, whimpering your name once more
shivers run down my spine, a temptress in the mist, the veil of shadows
spinning me about and casting my mind to doubt, as I'd still face the gallows
beyond lust, and beyond desire. Beyond hope of transcending any higher
I have failed or given up on just about anything I had touched
until I had saw you, tripped and fell as I became lost within a trance.
Ready to go yet stuck. Immobilized bearing a heart that has been traumatized
ACT II
Lost within the forest, so close to being found
Lost within the darkness, A shred of light becomes so profound
covet the small treasures, for they remind us life is precious
Live and love every moment like it was your last for we are conscious.
She spins me around, keeping me on my toes
darting between the trees keeping me guessing
spinning me around, I don't know what direction I am facing.
There is fog rolling in, sliding over the blades of grass
saturating the forest as it swell ever thicker,
watch as my soul before you starts to flicker.
Its a revelation, a spark of clarity.
Let me have this hour, and take control of this moment
yet always find myself over taken by your very presence
a disturbing and unsettling coincidence.
ACT III
Nobody survives the storm, her will becomes as sharp as knives
a succubus in disguise, better still an albatross should we have to compromise
She after all had stolen my heart, a sacrifice doomed from the start
where love breeds fools within us all, but you cannot hide forever behind your wall
and even the strongest becomes humbled, and their wall becomes shattered and crumbled
There was once a beautiful woman, who wore a beautiful dress
her eyes could pierce the sky, and set the heavens themselves ablaze
women envied her, and men melted within her gaze
She had been cursed as she fell from the stars,
celestial in all her glory, graceful while baring all the emotional scars.
Unbelievably beautiful! I
Unbelievably beautiful! I really loved this write, I am very much a fan of starcrossed love stories :) you have written this one beautifully an I love the closing paragraph, especially the last line. Thanks ss
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Thank you, I had wrote this
Thank you, I had wrote this for a woman who surprisingly I have not met yet. I had recently broken up with an ex during this piece's inception. The muse was for the "perfect" lover, a soulmate. Since the ex had basicly drug me out of hell kicking and screaming all with a smile on her face, she also became a great source of inspiration. Again thank you for the kind words, hope you enjoy many of my other works.
Wow, heart meltingly
Wow, heart meltingly beautifull. :) lol. It is very beautifull and heart felt, and very detailed. Very nice. I loved this. Plus the mystery, and fairy tale bits are a wonderfull touch, though it is sad.
-Elfy*
Thank you! :) and yeah I
Thank you! :) and yeah I notice a lot of my pieces are either morbid or sad hahah I have very few actual upbeat and positive ones.
Lol a lot of mine are like
Lol a lot of mine are like that too, so no worrys. :)
-Elfy*