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Journeys (The Mystical and the Incomprehensible)

air out your skin

and ride a kite

write some words

and ride a kite

you're just a cloudy baby

you're spitting a crying

you're just pounding the dust

your rainbow's bright

so cut your cords

and ride a kite

breathe some fragrance

and ride a kite

you're just a blue June scarab

you're just moving and shaking

you're just eating the sun

your rainbow's bright

so breathe in deep

and ride a kite

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last updated 12 October 2010 - 4:41am
©29 April 2004 - 10:19pm — sweet_saturn
30 April 2004 - 3:31am — stonesy
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Whimsical, my love. It's grand to see a recent poem from you that's not overly serious.....simple, full of sweet imagery. It's a lift.

I suggest you borrow "Some of the Dharma" by Kerouac from me. I think you would find it of interest, doll. Be grand, be lovely, me love you long time.

Finis.

MWAH, moi

30 April 2004 - 3:21am — Brittany Bunker (not verified)
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thanks so much for your comment on my poem. i love it when i find that someone has critiqued one of my poems! i'm sorry i haven't been commenting your work lately! i love this one. it's beautiful and it makes me feel happy! where did you get the inspiration and what exactly is it about? if you don't mind sharin it with me ;-). great work!
brittany~