A Weak Or So

called Mary Jane Friday night

told her i had to get away

needed a bit of room

to breathe

she laughed merciless in my face:



"You can't leave me baby.  You couldn't leave me for all the breaths in the atmosphere.  You couldn't leave me for any girl in the world.  You couldn't leave me to save your life.  You need me."



contained my welling indignation

told her it'd only be a week or so

needed to suck in some fresh air

dust my brain for cobwebs

she snorted in utter contempt



"A week or so is a long time, baby.  You'll wait a whole day for an hour to pass.  You'll tear out your hair and scream yourself to sleep.  You'll be burning quarters into your leg.  You'll wake up and you'll want to come back.  You need me."



slammed the telephone down hard

told the still air to fuck herself

searched my pockets for a joint

to wipe that call away



Oh yeah, a week or so

she's right like an arrow

i need her

Author's Notes/Comments: 

...pun intended.

You were my addiction, lover.

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Holly Johns's picture

i like this, alot! its great how you just let it flow, or at least made it seem that way. post some more, we're getting anxious! --hols

Brittany Bunker's picture

wow this is beautiful but so sad. you need to post some more.. you haven't done as much lately! oh...i listened to your song on that website and it's AWESOME! yall are very gifted. keep it up =)
brittany~

Molly K.'s picture

hey stephen, i like this one. you haven't written and posted one in forever. oh well this one is still amazing, keep writing and posting so i have good poetry to read. luv yas. bye

stonesy's picture

Hey darlin

I called Mary Jane on Friday night too. No luck. But in a different way. Another day, m'dear....