I dangle perilously from the edge
of her words
with slippery equivocal surfaces
that laugh the vain, sweaty grip
of my hand
merciless but jingling so sweetly
as i stumble out of her sky
(Icarus who thought he could fly)
to die a dusty, thirsty death
in some overlooked rain barrel
denied its purpose in the drought
but baking and wilting
i'm waiting for her rain
omg!! stephen, it's amazing and it's beautiful. i don't know how you write like this and so well, but it's beautiful and you're amazingly talented. never ever ever stop writing. i love you work. keep it coming.
WOW you're probably the best poet on this site!!!
brittany
wow stephen,how do you do this?!this is brilliant,you have such wonderful phrases(jingling so sweetly)thats beautiful!dont ever stop writing or i will personally kill you(as ive probly said before!hehe)ttyl ~guinevere~