the ride*

...

 

the ride was awesome

the feeling was incredible

I fell from a million stars

into your heart

and I never understood why I was so strong

because I couldnt see it

but you were under my wings the whole time

 real love has no scent;

it has no tangibility,

it is simply there,

and I feel,

as if I have the strength

to lift you a million stars high

without a word,

tucked under your hopes

and I will never

let you fall again

without me

...

 

 

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Just saw this again and wow

Just saw this again and wow what a conversation miss the old days on pp. 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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I loved..."I fell from a

I loved..."I fell from a million stars into your heart"...ahhh wow oh wowowow!! Great line Ssmoothest!

...♡♥♡


...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "

 

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yeah, I must admit, that line

yeah, I must admit, that line had me beaming... I felt like a super star! ;) hugss thanks my sweet!


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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Lol... bet that changed real

Lol... bet that changed real quick when you realized (like christ) what you had to do for it to come true, eh? :-D

 

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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "

 

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lololololololololololololololol

 this version didnt show his resurection... so there! ;P


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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Lovely Write

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