The F* Word

 

It scrawls up my spine writing incompetencies in my bones 

doodling weakness through my fleshen resolve

it sends frozen icicles reaching into my daring 

it wraps me with insecurities stifling tightly

bound with nerves on the brink of breaking

it covers my eyes, pinches my nose and welds my lips tight

it cover the pinholes and drowns out the light

it pours out uncertainty washing defeat all over me

as i pick at its seams with the smallest part of me

it shows me what true strength and hope means.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Part of a collab with roc and crew! Loved it so much just couldn't wait! You should definitely try it! More details soon! Hugss gtg so busy now, 

ok im back here's the link! :D check it out!

http://www.postpoems.org/authors/roc/poem/960590#comment-398873 

have a go! 

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Fuck

Fuck. Wonderful job. :x

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Lol love

Lol love you! http://www.postpoems.org/authors/poetic_eyes 


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thanks muchly guys n dolls

thanks muchly guys n dolls ;) 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

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Like Dove---I love that last

Like Dove---I love that last line as well. It wraps it up for me. ~peace~


...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "

 

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What of I changed it? 

What of I changed it? 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

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and it also fits in just

and it also fits in just about anywhere.

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The F Word

That's just epic brilliant. See, you never belong on the moon ;)


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That's cause I got Roc on my

That's cause I got Roc on my side ;) I blush! Hugss

nb* moon rocks... I'd love one! 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

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Whoever thought up ...fleshen

Whoever thought up ...fleshen resolve...gets the Lady A "F-Word of the Month" award for genius! ~~A~~



Onyamaichi

 

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Lady A you are just such an

Lady A you are just such an uplifting presence! Love ya! Hugss and thanks ! :D 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am