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I want to reach for the stars with you
leaping on to the smokey haze of galaxies
And let the momentum thrust us further
into the heavens hand in hand
twirling parting, hiding behind stars,
peeking into black holes,
throwing shooting stars,
chasing comets around the suns.
and every now and then we'd stop a and stare
Comparing the dull suns to the twinkle of love in our eyes.

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last updated 4 December 2012 - 9:47pm
©4 December 2012 - 1:48pm — SSmoothie
17 February 2013 - 11:44am — SSmoothie
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Thanks ;) yeah, it's bit

Thanks ;) yeah, it's bit special for me too! Hugss 

Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

21 December 2012 - 5:32am — Jesster
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Love this smoothie!!

Love this smoothie!!

Copyright © JessterStarshine

3 March 2013 - 12:28pm — SSmoothie
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Some how I thought you would!

Some how I thought you would! ;) so happy you do! Hugss 

Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

13 December 2012 - 8:05am — Beavis
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;-)

Simply beautiful!!!

3 March 2013 - 12:25pm — SSmoothie
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Awe thanks b! Yeah, I love

Awe thanks b! Yeah, I love this too because my mind wonders as it wanders those stars where you are, a near a lone star shining gloriously! ;) 

Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

4 December 2012 - 7:52pm — humanpulse
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I like how you merged Romans

I like how you merged Romans with Astronomy. I really like they way you expressed your feelings in a novel way.

22 August 2013 - 3:49pm — SSmoothie
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Thanks human pulse!  Whst a

Thanks human pulse!  Whst a lovely thing to say! Msde my day! :) hugss

Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

4 December 2012 - 7:13pm — Spinoza
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leaping on to the smokey haze

leaping on to the smokey haze of galaxies

... I like the way your mind operates.

~/~

23 December 2012 - 11:16am — SSmoothie
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Thanks :) I have a mind that

Thanks :) I have a mind that likes to be present and wander at the same time! Lol! Cheers SS

Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

22 August 2013 - 5:11pm — allets
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Black Hole Peeping

This is dangerous poet work and I want to sign up. Love that line and the rest are the comet's tail along for the journey ~ lovely voyage, mdear, star sailing (a new sport) Wink ~allets