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To catch a thief
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Soul mates What supersedes this hollow core?
The endless ache around the edges
of where my heart used to be,
before you took it?
What surpasses this feeling of dread,
the sudden desolation all around
from the moment that you suddenly
left my my world?
What exceeds this this hopeless longing
For consummation of a love so high
that's too beautiful to defile
With lustful whims?
What Overtakes this endless love?
Where is this gallant knight who will
take me away From this devastation
and bring me back to living?
What Surmounts this impossible situation
When not even my wildest imagination
Can see a way through to being one with two
there is though a tiny seed of hope ready to spawn
Another cycle of never ending doubt and fascination
With trying to catch the greatest thief of my tainted heart.
HugSS!!!
I think it's perfect as is! I love it! Great write! ;-)
Hugss back at cha b! ;)
Hugss back at cha b! ;)
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Hugs :) great work
Hugs :) great work
irockpoker
Thankyou irockpoker! Gosh I
Thankyou irockpoker! Gosh I love your pseudonym! I ore ally like your Poetry too keep writing I may not be able to comment but I do read as much as I can I enjoy your work! Hugss
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
HEART
HEART
Yeah the hollow edges eh? I
Yeah the hollow edges eh? I agree links in well with the poem! :) thanks good5tuff cheerSS
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
None of them
The thief made off with your love and left a tainted heart. It was not tainted when it was taken, I don't think.
"Music is a universal language and needs not be translated. With it, soul speaks to soul" - Songsterr
Excellent point! Grrrrr! Why
Excellent point! Grrrrr! Why didn't I honk of that!?
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Awesome poem!! I love it !!!
Awesome poem!! I love it !!! It would mean a lot if you went and checked out one of my poems!!
A heart is like a puzzle. It's hard to put together when the pieces are broken and missing.
RedAsBlood :)
Thanks :) cheers SS
Thanks :) cheers SS
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Love this Ssmoothie. Of
Love this Ssmoothie. Of course I am sorry you're going through the pain... Hugs
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Thanks my lovely HW, it's
Thanks my lovely HW, it's more a poem of thoughts, it needs work to make it one from my heart, the pain, is a well worn friend my dear,I think I'd fid it rather lonely if it left :) HugSS HugSS
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."