...
Dare I confess the black stain on my soul?
No, rather, lets tuck it in conscience
No need to feel sickly an numb.
Tuck it away my soulless one
What if I could pull the hands back of time?
You can't sweety, it's done
Can I make it fade?
I don't see how? It's a dark, dark stain,
And you've been trying so long now.
Even with all my good deeds?
There aren't enough good deeds
To wipe it clean the lead in your soul
Forever drags your feet.
I don't deserve anything
Because you are destined
Destined for what? A life of misery?
No dear, no, a life of greatness,
None of clear conscience strive
To erase me from their minds
As I would not exist,
and neither would the gift.
But I don't understand?
Your stain is a gift,
The journey of the holy grail.
Where others strive and fail,
You have already failed now strive.
But I failed?
You have failed, but now is hope
The ever charging fuel of your journey
My soul is damned isn't it?
You have nothing to lose
But what of hell? surely it waits?
Hell? You're already here,
Perhaps one day, you'll make it out?
You think so?
It's possible but
I'm your conscience...
What do I know?
I just know why I exist
And I in turn wish I loved my existence
So there's no hope?
There's always hope,
I'm with you aren't I?
Yes, but I don't understand?
You don't need to,
Just keep hope, and in us,
Never forget where we've come from
You are destined.
But I am stained?
No, you are marked for greatness...
i love the dialogue here
i love the dialogue here between mind and soul, love it
Wonderful, fantastic write,
Wonderful, fantastic write, my words are so weak with what I dribble on here. You hold me captive.
Susan Bressman
Thankyou lovethatred, oh my,
Thankyou lovethatred, oh my, I blush captivating? Your works are very compelling to me actually, i love the way they are full of the real ness and raw emotion one loves to be privy to! Hugss
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
...um,.. wow.
I have always held your abilities with words, and the condition of life expressed so well in high regards, and again, you've raised that bar. Bravo. I felt every line, and it mingled, melted, and fixed my own thoughts inward to face my own demons. I am very moved by this poem, and thank you for working your magic yet again. Bravo.
jrfehlmann
Thankyou, and I love your
Thankyou, and I love your style, so intelligent and wise with a touch of the forlorn, to engrossing writes ! I sincerely appreciate your complement tight HugSS
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Hope
Is all you really need to survive
Hope is the strength to keep you alive
Through all the pain and torment in your mind
Hope is the power to make sure you thrive
...this is beautifully cataclysmic. Such ordered chaos. Brilliant madness. Sheer power in spoken word.
Brilliant muses too. Makes perfect sense.
"Music is a universal language and needs not be translated. With it, soul speaks to soul" - Songsterr
And yet you muse me more than
And yet you muse me more than many others and still I can't write the words well enough to say! Still, theres always hope! ;) HugSS
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
That is because
you seek perfection for your dedications. But what you fail to realize, is that it is already perfection the moment your fingers start dancing on the keys.
"Music is a universal language and needs not be translated. With it, soul speaks to soul" - Songsterr
Awe thanks HugSS, Ps that new
Awe thanks HugSS,
Ps that new piece, man that felt so private I'm still thinking what and how to comment! ;O
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Eh...
nothing too personal, just random thoughts compiled into rhyme.
That's what most of my writings are anyway. A stray thought crossed my mind and I just build on it lyrically.
"Music is a universal language and needs not be translated. With it, soul speaks to soul" - Songsterr
Because you're a legend! ;)
Because you're a legend! ;)
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Hell?
...You're already here~~~what a line, what a concept I have always sensed, here said so eloquently simply - nice penning on all things purgatorial and heavenly hoped for - Be well - Lady A
Thankyou my dear lady A hop
Thankyou my dear lady A hop to catch up soon with your work, I like to take my time to read great writes! !
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."