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The silky strings of empathic poetry wind thier way through my mind to my fingertips,
In turn each caress hums electricity and glowing reverberated letters form the beauty of eloquence reserved for greats,restrained. Instead the satin pearls lay sprawled gathered with elcectric tweed and tied with pixel yarn with pebbles inbetween , the pearls calling to eacother to dance together on the electric string, and the pebbles beg for polish in order for thier beauty to sing. I will not. For they are eloquence and beauty to me, and are as my creative souls expression faultless in the delivery of my first truth, in all art simply elegantly evocative in the highest pefection of the electrons clumsy imperfectly formed inspirations birth.
Deep.
Do you believe us as poets have the potential to be great writers? I mean we are already great writers. But to maybe spill the worlds that live in our head onto paper for the world to see.. There is a with out a doubt a world that exists only in your head. A place you created and show pieces of it like a window looking into this vast world of your mind. have you ever thought about writing something along the lines of a book, or stories. for every piece you write leaves me glued to the words you so finely woven together to form a beautiful piece of poetry. Its so brilliant. That if you did ever write a full book I may have to take a few days off work so I can read it in one sitting, for I wont be able to probably put it down.:) Cheers. I love everything you write, It definitely worth the read. Thank you.
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woah! im floored! i think you just made my year!
Unknownprodigy, I never expected to hear or read a comment like this ever and I am deeply honored you think so as you know by some my comments on your works I enjoy and respect your work (and taste in music) ;) very highly. It is so lovely of you to say, I would love to but time constraints leave me unable to ppreally develop or finish anything not related to my work. I do write very arty and challenging scripts for theatre productions but this is a different type of writing, but does tend to zap the best out of me. Sometimes I feel like there's nothing left to write for me on pp. So to hear you say this is very uplifting for a 'dumb dyslexic kid' who moons thought would amount to much. We are all great poets yes, we seek though to resonate on others frequencies and evoke empthic or psychological responses in our readers, great poets are pretty much popular poets. I just want to express my self. If helps others wonderful. If I could bring to life the visions in my mind that would be quite a feat indeed, so I'd rather let the reader imagine thier own scapes to thier own tastes, they are more than capable. :) I can't help but makesure I comment on the impressive works of yours I have read overtime rest assured I will. Keep that talent honed, ever grateful, cheers SS you rock! ;D
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
your best
so far
except
for the occasional mis-spellings
Peace
Dylan
"One of the best results of life, is the torment of love"
Dylan Eliot
thanks Dylon
That's very encouraging :) spelling: I just wish this smart phone was my iPad! It's not the same and I miss it since it was stolen. It had grammar and spell checks that worked better for this clumsy dyslexic , And was far more responsive! Cheers SS
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."