When I think of you
My heart skips a beat
My breath becomes shallow
My eyes glisten
When I think of you
My mind races
My legs become weak
My mouth becomes dry
When you leave
My heart becomes slow
My breath- more like sighs
My eyes become dull
When you leave
My mind worries
My legs start to hurt
My mouth cannot form words
You keep me on my toes...
You do not try to hurt me..
How I feel is amazing.....
so impressive and well done poem is it... really a great in rhythmic way...you seem a good poetess indeed....well done friend..this is really a good poem.. impressive and heart catchy too..you did in a good way and impressive..hope you also go through my more poems... to know if my poems shake your heart or not???... I am basically known as peace wisher poet with six books published...I really wish to see the world in peace.. and we can a great role being poets...let me share with you one of my famous say .. ((( a friendly smile is the best weapon of war to fight with...afzal shauq )))