When I think of You

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When I think of you

My heart skips a beat

My breath becomes shallow

My eyes glisten



When I think of you

My mind races

My legs become weak

My mouth becomes dry



When you leave

My heart becomes slow

My breath- more like sighs

My eyes become dull



When you leave

My mind worries

My legs start to hurt

My mouth cannot form words



You keep me on my toes...

You do not try to hurt me..

How I feel is amazing.....

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For my BF Brendan

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Afzal Shauq's picture

so impressive and well done poem is it... really a great in rhythmic way...you seem a good poetess indeed....well done friend..this is really a good poem.. impressive and heart catchy too..you did in a good way and impressive..hope you also go through my more poems... to know if my poems shake your heart or not???... I am basically known as peace wisher poet with six books published...I really wish to see the world in peace.. and we can a great role being poets...let me share with you one of my famous say .. ((( a friendly smile is the best weapon of war to fight with...afzal shauq )))