Unfortunately

Shattering into a million glimmering shards,

the vase seemingly imploded just left of her head.

Yet, preceding the vase, the front window

performed a remarkably similar routine.

And yet before both of these events,

a crisp crack’s echo bounced around the streets.

Of course, all the above described events

occurred in such a quick procession,

they appeared nearly to be simultaneous.

It was the combination of the three that

produced such a shocking scare in the heart

of an elderly lady, snoozing in the recliner.

Suddenly, overwhelmed with surging adrenaline,

her heart violently seized up and struggled

vehemently to maintain its well practiced music.

Out in the yard, jaw hanging askew, eyes wide,

a young boy drops his small aluminum bat.

Knowing he was in the near absolute deepest

trouble fathomable, his heart was also flooded.

It being young and strong, this heart handled

the onslaught of adrenaline quite well.

Then, the boy notices through the open door,

the absence of his grandmother’s favorite vase.

At the exact same moment both hearts stop.

Unfortunately, for everyone held dearly within it,

only the boy’s again begins to pound out its beat.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Notes/Comments: 

In one moment a lot can happen.

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Kamusta's picture

unfortuantely

This is good stuff.

Sky's picture

Thank you, Mr. Kamusta.  I am

Thank you, Mr. Kamusta. 

I am glad you enjoyed the narrative


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sweetwater's picture

This is terrific, read the

This is terrific, read the first few lines and I was hooked. It's very, very well written, loved the clever and thoughtful choice of words. Please post more like this, I could read them all day.  :-) x

Sky's picture

Thank you so much for the

Thank you so much for the comment! I also enjoy this poem, although it is slightly sad. 

 


We'll just keep writing 'til there's nothing left to write.

We'll just keep waiting 'til they read all our works left to right.