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yesing the "no"s wip 4/13/09
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the Nothing that i know Lord i want to be a blessing
receiving blessings
no more guessing
done with stressing
and always Yes'ing
the "no"s keep messing
me up
Simple, strong, and very meaningful.
I love this poem, good work girly.
You will mess up, so say YES
to getting back up, and not stressing it.
Goodluck.
the last two lines
Putting the rhyme inside made the line poetic...othewise its just rhymed prose...with subject paramount...a topic is necessary, a central theme mandated, but there is so much more...Lady A