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Broken heart,

from being flattered.

I'll not give in,

to my life shattered.

Blurred vision,

mind spinning.

I'll not give in,

to your winning.

Thought's of sadness,

throughout my mind.

I'll not give in,

that you left me blind.

Uncontrolable behavior,

from a love so strong.

I gave in to easily,

for that I was wrong.

So if you return again,

to tear me apart.

I'll not give in,

like I did from the start...

Author's Notes/Comments: 

You see what can happen when we rush into our emotion's for love? In the final analysis our mind's are so confused as to what had happened to us that it's often very hard to get away from what it has done to us. Do not worry, your heart can be repaired, although it will take some time, but well worthwaiting for in the end ok.

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©6 November 2002 - 12:23am — nancylangley
6 November 2003 - 12:17am — *~* Slendah*~* (not verified)
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I love your style of poetry. You should consider publishing a book.

23 November 2002 - 10:04am — Tim Derr (not verified)
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Sadly touching, this poem bleeds a lot in the beginning, yet holds a power soon to reckoned with.
Somehow I find a strong faith in survival almost emanating from some external fountain, as if the faith itself is a divine gift.

I liked the wisdom in your summation. ~Tim