I stood watching the open sky,
the sun rising and filling it,
Like a lone flower looks prominent in a plant,
Did the sun look at that,
I tried to relax,
My dark days had arrived again,
And I was gathering up courage to face them,
Although I thought I had the guts,
I was still agitated by the remembrance,
Of all other dark phases of life I went through,
But I thought it was better to make the moment mine,
Shared with my God,
I screwed my eyes not just because of the sun's blazing light,
But also because I was having my morning cry...
The Mark Of A Great Poet
Writing from life's realities with style and grace, devices that work, a tone that embraces and infuses the reader with exactitude of mood says this well and is a voice for every topic possible. U got me there, the" morning cry" as a ritual, like yawning awake when heavy with post-sleep. Bravo! - slc
it isn't morning but..
I read this right after a cry and heavy giggles. Looking forward to seeing more. Welcome!
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hopefully the morning cry
hopefully the morning cry will be followed with an afternoon giggle.
Hahahaha! :)
Hahahaha! I wish i could write something like that but hopefully it will be some sad stuff.....Ya know, Abandonment and all....