Morning Cry.....

 

I stood watching the open sky,

 

the sun rising and filling it,

 

Like a lone flower looks prominent in a plant,

 

Did the sun look at that,

 

I tried to relax,

 

My dark days had arrived again,

 

And I was gathering up courage to face them,

 

Although I thought I had the guts,

 

I was still agitated by the remembrance,

 

Of all other dark phases of life I went through,

 

But I thought it was better to make the moment mine,

 

Shared with my God,

 

I screwed my eyes not just because of the sun's blazing light,

 

But also because I was having my morning cry...

 

Author's Notes/Comments: 

I am writing poetry from a long time....Wanted to share my first poem here first....Hope you all like it!!!!!

ROSE CALDWELL!Cool

 

allets's picture

The Mark Of A Great Poet

Writing from life's realities with style and grace, devices that work, a tone that embraces and infuses the reader with exactitude of mood says this well and is a voice for every topic possible. U got me there, the" morning cry" as a ritual, like yawning awake when heavy with post-sleep. Bravo! - slc


 

 

Jesster's picture

it isn't morning but..

I read this right after a cry and heavy giggles. Looking forward to seeing more. Welcome!


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georgeschaefer's picture

hopefully the morning cry

hopefully the morning cry will be followed with an afternoon giggle.

SecretGiggles's picture

Hahahaha! :)

Hahahaha! I wish i could write something like that but hopefully it will be some sad stuff.....Ya know, Abandonment and all....