The smell of pine ensnares my nose,
Circles my nostrils like a whirlpool of senses
Needles fall softly to the ground,
And once landing, rise up and continue their dance
The wind flows in from the south
Pauses, the bellows in from the west
As if the wind was lost and then
After checking the map, shot off confidently in the right direction
Among the pines stands a maple
That without shame shows its orange and red
Uses the colour as a means of letting the world know
That it will not leave without a picture to remember it by
Down by the lake the wind also plays
As the waves roll carelessly against the sand
Bringing in new members to join the beach
And then sneakily taking back some to keep the balance
Standing in this scene is my dog
Ignoring the beauty and barking at the wind
line 9 says he when I believe it should say the :)
this is diffrent for you
I kinda like it, its the least sad I've seen you write in a while
Much Love
Ashley