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Lifeless
I am the first thing.
I am the worst thing.
I'm what lives deep inside.
From the time your born,
to the time you die
I'll play around with your mind.
But pardon me for being rude.
Where have my manners gone?
My name is quite a hallowed thing,
it alone make waking hours long.
I rule your fate.
Your in my grasp.
I'll watch you squeem and squirm.
To me your life is but a game,
but it'll never be your turn.
Some call me the one that spawns hate,
or the root of all that is bad.
But I prefur "the one that will drive you mad."
Everyone is a puppet for me.
Villinous is my intent.
I will break you and make you cry.
Life my only enemy.
The imagery is powerful to say the least, I must say that this is not at all what I am accustomed to with your writting, i'm impressed.
nikki
Nicole.J.Burgesss
I like it...I can relate to it which is kinda scary.
I love the way you wrote it!
It's really well done
Loves
i love it
the lines
"To me your life is but a game,
but it'll never be your turn."
are amazing, and far too true
k but for real tis is to morbid, shall we say, for you
cheer up luv, or i'll have to drive down there and make you :)
much love
ash
Much Love
Ashley
Just wanted to mention I really like the effect that's added by -not- naming the nameless thing. Really nice touch.