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Feel like the worlds abandoned me,
why can’t it just let me be.
People changing their tune,
hope my life stables off soon.
How do people expect me to strive,
when even society can’t survive.
Society I’m calling you out,
I’m taking you down without a doubt.
So take your ten paces,
I’m sick of these rat races.
Working hard, its really a drag,
but I’ll never wave the white flag.
The world better get use to my style,
cause I plan on being here for a while.
When our children stop using their brain,
we will know exactly what’s to blame.
The place that clams that it is free,
A place that wont let me be me.
A place that shuns individuality,
there is no way that they can stop me.
Society I’m calling you out,
I’m taking you down and out for the count.
So go and take your ten paces,
and I’ll see you fall from your graces.
Your think you can control our minds,
but we'll stay free till the end of time.
You think you are the ones in control,
you have less then you'll ever know.
The whole thing is a very good point and I love it but the best lines for me were:
When our children stop using their brain,
we will know exactly what’s to blame.
I really liked that one.
nikki
Nicole.J.Burgesss
draw as in when a cowboy pulls his gun from his
holster to fire. relates to the "ten paces."
but why DRAW?
Much Love
Ashley
oh little Mr. Anarchy :)
my baby's all grown up and killing important peopl :)
no for real
i love it
i am so into taking over and tossin the dopes who run the world
but vicki is right (to bad she got here first)
survive is better and as soon as i read it i thoguht it was a typo
"When our children stop using their brain,
we will know exactly what’s to blame."
no shit eh
have you seen soem of the stuff they make for barbie now? ITS INSANE! they leave nothing for the kid to do but get bored and have no mind nor imagination!
but i think its your best so far
man i knew you were a kewl person but telling Society off
thats just tooooo great
Much Love
Ashley
Hey,
I would change one of the strive's in the frist stanza to survive but that is just me. You have comma's in teh chorus that shouldn't be there or the 'g' shouldn't be.... I like the third stanza... the ryhming scheme is great all the way through..and the fourth stanza is great too...i liek the last as well lol... i liek the whole thing! lol it is great
love ya always
Vicki