To whom this may concern,
my heart will forever burn.
With the memory of your face,
the acentuance of your grace.
Your skin strong, yet fair.
How i see you everywhere.
your laughter,
your humour,
your Je ne sais quoi?
The way you seem to have no flaw.
Yet,
modest with your perfection,
strengthening our connection.
But a wall stands between us,
stunting what is fair and just.
The only reason we don't grow,
who you are i do not know.
I Like it...It's well written (like all the others)
BTW it's Je ne sais quoi?
I'm not sure if that's only allowed speaking or if you can actually write that but meh?
Loves
Kit
This is good,I like how you decided to add in the french, and I do think it is spelt right, maybe...hmmm.
oh well
good
nikki
Nicole.J.Burgesss
lol i liek that alot
and the whole i do not know part
bam
hehe
and i love writing poetry on the bus there is nothign liek it
in fact i am going to drag rueben on a bus ride today! there is nothing like a good ride on the bus to heal the soul :)
oh and the title
man i love these types of poems
it made me happy
(well so did the lack of sleep on my part but meh)
ash
Much Love
Ashley
can't help you with the spelling but i liek the poem...very intriguing lol :) Vicki likes
love ya always
Vicki