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I finally figured out why I have no feeling inside

It is because when I lost my sweet Elie I died

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I loved her with all of my being, and I lost her and no longer am.

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last updated 12 October 2010 - 1:44am
©29 August 2005 - 8:42am — renaissance633
18 March 2006 - 10:10pm — C C (not verified)
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Few words,many emotions. Made my heart hurt for you.

19 October 2005 - 7:07pm — Kristi Christen (not verified)
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beautiful. you dont even have to know who Elie is to feel the loss.

7 September 2005 - 2:53pm — teresa_r
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I read some of your poems
and i can relate to them
I know what it is like to loose
someone you love.

28 November 2011 - 6:12pm — renaissance633
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My lost love

Indeed I lost her and deservedly so. I drank her out of my life and out of our home. All of those wrecks I saw in the rear view mirror were caused by my own shortsightedness. I deserved some sort of punishment, but I didn't know it would be this bad. I am so sorry... I have discovered hell... I often wonder if new love could help but at my advanced years I also wonder if it is even possible. Meanwhile I am sad.

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