Wind whips against sunbeaten skin,
While hair follows it's example
As it curls, tangling across vision,
Wrapping around, shielding eyes.
Thoughtlessly brushed away,
And tucked behind an ear,
It stubbornly returns,
An endless cycle.
Rocky cliff,
Sandstone and quartz,
Looms up behind as
Birds wheel above,
Mostly seagulls, but a
Few crows fly past,
Taking advantage of
The people to the left
Who are playing in the
Surf, their food stores
Being ransacked.
Those birds are eating well.
The shoreline stretches, arcs,
Holds it's pose,
Golden and gleaming,
It embraces itself.
The ocean spreads out beyond,
Deep sapphire blue waves that fade
To palest shades of shyest green
Topped with a scattering of diamonds.
Falling back into the sand,
Arms stretched to the sides,
Eyes tilted towards the sky
Where wisps of clouds form.
One, a gladiator, standing tall with
Spear and shield, slowly morphs as
He passes the sky's road,
Turning into a large raven in mid-flight.
Another is a spine, from which there
Sprouts a ribcage.
It breathes out, dissipating itself.
The saddest existence.
But the feel of the earth beneath
Brings thoughts that the sky is
Perhaps the true ocean.
Fingers dig deeply into sand,
Grasping the gold,
And gravity is shifted
As the soul pours out the eyes,
Falling into the sky.
Man
I got lost in your imagery and was then amazed at the surrealism in nature. This is a very powerful piece.
"Where do you go when nowhere feels like home?"-FBMF
Thanks!
I'm glad you found it relatable. =) I'm always amazed every time I step outside my house. Observations could fill a book, I think.
Hi !! Small girl with far seeing eyes.... Liked the write
Hi !! Small girl Relia Morello or whatever
with far seeing eyes.... Liked the write
You are indeed wise..... May your future be bright
~An~Oldie~not~friend
©bishu
Awww
Why thank you, bishu! Here's hoping it is. (P.S., just Reila is fine =)
Sorry for the spelling mistake Reila
Sorry for the spelling mistake Reila.Your thoughts and writes are quite mature & very profound for a small girl. You will find it clear from my Respected friend 9inety's comment.Be happy.Be safe.God bless.
©bishu
OH WOW! I think you should
OH WOW! I think you should stop doing anything at all, and just observe, then you could help everyone see how truly beautiful this world really is! This is such a wonderful poem, I especially love your description of the ocean, and the 'palest shades of shyest green'- beautiful. thank you for posting. :-) X
water is magical
don t swim too far! :) x
Visual poet/ Libertine lost in a labyrinth of complexities, methaphors, searching for the essence/ Ink of life/ death to spell my syphilistic words on the page/ screen.
I can't!
I'll sit on the beach and let my friends do the swimming. I prefer to observe things anyway. =)
good to keep safe
ok i guess is far more safe, maybe you had many times drowned and is safer to keep looking , very good poem anyhow, namaste
Visual poet/ Libertine lost in a labyrinth of complexities, methaphors, searching for the essence/ Ink of life/ death to spell my syphilistic words on the page/ screen.
My beach is lighthouse park
My beach is lighthouse park beneath the blue water bridge in Port Huron, Mi. I remember the last time I was there, on the sand, twigs poking my bare skin, Stones hot from the sun, sand, probably polluted, felt like the best kind of bathing and basking and yes the sky is an ocean :D ~slc~
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