Vertigo Switch

Wind whips against sunbeaten skin,

While hair follows it's example

As it curls, tangling across vision,

Wrapping around, shielding eyes.

 

Thoughtlessly brushed away, 

And tucked behind an ear,

It stubbornly returns,

An endless cycle.

 

Rocky cliff,

Sandstone and quartz,

Looms up behind as

Birds wheel above,

 

Mostly seagulls, but a 

Few crows fly past,

Taking advantage of

The people to the left

 

Who are playing in the 

Surf, their food stores

Being ransacked.

Those birds are eating well.

 

The shoreline stretches, arcs,

Holds it's pose, 

Golden and gleaming,

It embraces itself.

 

The ocean spreads out beyond,

Deep sapphire blue waves that fade

To palest shades of shyest green

Topped with a scattering of diamonds.

 

Falling back into the sand, 

Arms stretched to the sides,

Eyes tilted towards the sky

Where wisps of clouds form.

 

One, a gladiator, standing tall with 

Spear and shield, slowly morphs as

He passes the sky's road,

Turning into a large raven in mid-flight.

 

Another is a spine, from which there 

Sprouts a ribcage. 

It breathes out, dissipating itself.

The saddest existence.

 

But the feel of the earth beneath

Brings thoughts that the sky is 

Perhaps the true ocean. 

Fingers dig deeply into sand,

 

Grasping the gold,

And gravity is shifted

As the soul pours out the eyes,

Falling into the sky.

 

 

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Went to the beach with my best friend today. Had an excellent time.

Callis.at.the.Palace's picture

Man

I got lost in your imagery and was then amazed at the surrealism in nature. This is a very powerful piece.


"Where do you go when nowhere feels like home?"-FBMF

ReilaMorello's picture

Thanks!

I'm glad you found it relatable. =) I'm always amazed every time I step outside my house. Observations could fill a book, I think.

bishu's picture

Hi !! Small girl with far seeing eyes.... Liked the write

Hi !! Small girl Relia Morello or whatever

with far seeing eyes....  Liked the write

You are indeed wise..... May your future  be bright

 

~An~Oldie~not~friend


©bishu 

 

ReilaMorello's picture

Awww

Why thank you, bishu! Here's hoping it is. (P.S., just Reila is fine =)

bishu's picture

Sorry for the spelling mistake Reila

Sorry for the spelling mistake Reila.Your thoughts and writes are quite mature & very profound  for a small girl. You will find it clear from my Respected friend 9inety's comment.Be happy.Be safe.God bless.


©bishu 

 

sweetwater's picture

OH WOW! I think you should

OH WOW! I think you should stop doing anything at all, and just observe, then you could help everyone see how truly beautiful this world really is! This is such a wonderful poem, I especially love your description of the ocean, and the 'palest shades of shyest green'- beautiful. thank you for posting. :-) X 

MargoT's picture

water is magical

don t swim too far!   :) x


Visual poet/ Libertine lost in a labyrinth of complexities, methaphors, searching for the essence/ Ink of life/ death to spell my syphilistic words on the page/ screen.       

ReilaMorello's picture

I can't!

I'll sit on the beach and let my friends do the swimming. I prefer to observe things anyway.  =)

MargoT's picture

good to keep safe

ok i guess is far more safe, maybe you had many times drowned and is safer to keep looking , very good poem anyhow, namaste


Visual poet/ Libertine lost in a labyrinth of complexities, methaphors, searching for the essence/ Ink of life/ death to spell my syphilistic words on the page/ screen.       

allets's picture

My beach is lighthouse park

My beach is lighthouse park beneath the blue water bridge in Port Huron, Mi. I remember the last time I was there, on the sand, twigs poking my bare skin, Stones hot from the sun, sand, probably polluted, felt like the best kind of bathing and basking and yes the sky is an ocean :D ~slc~

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