* My Step Mother *

                    my love for you

                    will stay the same

                    because i just want

                    you to know you are

                     one of kind to me

                    a true bond that flows

                    from our hearts making

                    us mother and daughter

                    in spirit as well in

                    reality forever because

                     ( i love you mom ).





                * this poem is all mine *

Author's Notes/Comments: 

mom, I love you and
i'm so gald you are my
step mom , i cant wait to
be part of your family
you all mean so much to me god blessed us so well

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liltigg10's picture

i realy like this poem i have a step mother too, and i was blessed i could not have asked for a better step mother and this poem reminds me of her so much and how much i love her thank you for shareing this poem

gentle's picture

This one I can relate to. My stepmom is not only the love of my father's life, but truly a lovely lady for mine.

Amy


Gentle is the night♥

White Shadow's picture

You have just about critiqued all my poems so I thought I should critique another of yours. Glad you liked my poems. This line just seems wrong

mother and daughter
bond that comes flows
from our hearts .

Maybe something like

A bond that flows from our hearts making us mother and daughter in spirit as well as in reality forever
then as an afterthought
(I love you mum)