Babe i love your
bright shiny smile
you light up my life
seeing your face near
to me did you know u
complete me in every
way. your white teeth
are so neat and clean.
i can see my reflection
in them, also your
gorgeous brown eyes to as
you smile and look at me.
THIS PIECE IS ALL MINE
Your poem is lovely like bright shiny smile. Some smiles are really too attractive to be described. Tabassum is a Persian and Urdu word meaning 'smile'. There is a famous line in Persian:
'Choon marg aaiyad tabassum bar lab-i-oost
(When he dies, smiles play on his face)
Smilesz.
A cute poem, full of life and the hopefulness of youth . Promising a lifetime of love, i am sure.
Thanxs for sharing this, Gail.
Much enjoyed.