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                     Babe i love your

                     bright shiny smile

                     you light up my life

                     seeing your face near

                     to me did you know u

                     complete me in every

                     way. your white teeth

                     are so neat and clean.

                     i can see my reflection

                     in them, also  your

                     gorgeous brown eyes to as

                     you smile and look at me.



                  THIS PIECE IS ALL MINE

Author's Notes/Comments: 

* Tabassum * is a poem
about a cutiety with a
amazing bright smile his
smile is so wonderful he
defintelty brights up my
life and it is the truth.

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last updated 12 October 2010 - 12:57am
©22 June 2002 - 9:48am — poetvg
12 April 2004 - 4:47am — iqbalar
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Your poem is lovely like bright shiny smile. Some smiles are really too attractive to be described. Tabassum is a Persian and Urdu word meaning 'smile'. There is a famous line in Persian:
'Choon marg aaiyad tabassum bar lab-i-oost
(When he dies, smiles play on his face)

24 June 2002 - 5:44pm — Melvin Lee II (not verified)
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Smilesz.
A cute poem, full of life and the hopefulness of youth . Promising a lifetime of love, i am sure.
Thanxs for sharing this, Gail.
Much enjoyed.