Behind Closed Eyes

Stop! Close your eyes, imagine me...
What do you see?
A tall, dark and handsome man
Be kind and charming is my plan.
I'm everything you ever wanted,
Yet I'm everything I've ever hated. 
You had your eyes closed from the very start, you're blind, 
Completely out of your mind.
I deceived you, I'm a succubus,
I'm sorry it wasn't obvious.
But misery loves company
And love is just lusts disguise,
Well so it is behind closed eyes.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

This is my first ever poem and my first time showing anyone this. I apologise in advance for any grammar mistakes and such, so please don't criticise me on that, after all poetry is the expression of ones feelings not the expression grammatical knowledge.

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Much appreciated guys, this community seems very supportive... So far xD. But what do you think to my poem, as it being my first time and all.