I'm A Goddess

I'm a Goddess searching the night..

Showing off my beauty too the brightness of the moonlight...

Bath water runs full of delightful bubbles....

Slowly getting in tilting my head back in relaxation.....

My mind slowly grooves too the beat of lover & friends..

As the stars watch me bath my chocolate smooth skin in the

pleasant scents of dove body wash...

Candle lights gently massage the tense outta my soul....

My hearts untangling from being twisted up in pain.....



I'm a goddess standing before the beauty of the moon

rinsing the heavy cracks from within my soul.....

I want too savor the sweetness of this feeling in me....

Wishing it'll become more than a dream...

I want it too be real..Pain is beautiful yet sometimes it burdens

& takes away the light of my essence from shining through...



In the mirror i stand looking through my reflection..

of bruised wounds bleeding deep...I'm still a diamond

keeping my head up from roughness hoping....

Keeping faith that one day more then the brightness of the

moonlight will see that within I'm A Goddess.....

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Jus tryna write something beauitful fo once lol dammit

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Shaketa Copelin's picture

This was beautiful. A different writing side of you. I likes...

yellowspecks's picture

Wow. Honestly and maybe i've said this before but ... This is the best poem, in my opinion, i have read of yours. There is way too much good about it, i could go on and on. There is a beauty that you grasp the first time you read it, but read it twice and wow. Great job. You know, alot of your stuff is so beautiful. Even when you write of pain and saddness there is a feeling that you are a soul who will fly. You are a fighter, there is so much beauty in you. Dont forget that. ~Rae

Elvin Marks's picture

Wow! "I'm a Goddess searching the night..
Showing off my beauty too the brightness of the moonlight..."
This is very vivid and intriguing. I am very glad to see you write something in a new category of poetry. I liked the content and story behind these lines here. Good job girl and may GOD continue to bless you forever! Peace!

Corie Lynn M.'s picture

This is an excellent write. I needed to read something like this,
I've been pretty depressed lately.

Anyway sorry I haven't been on for a few days, I was busy with Eric's funeral and layout. And trying to find out what is wrong with my other friend, Megan.