Is it enough to wake up everyday
wonder if you'll survive
to sit all day and wonder
what it means to be alive.
When your heart just keeps on pounding
though you wish that you were dead
when your playing back the memories
of everything he said.
When each step takes you far away
from the safety of your bed
and you yearn to see the dripping
of your life coloured in red.
When you tell people your happy
and you wonder why you lie
not one of then will give a damn
after they've said goodbye.
Is it enough to hate existance
or do you think it's wrong
I doubt that i'll care either way
when you finally find i'm gone.
impressive alot.. and again a good poem with rich idea and heart touching effects... well done
WOW I can relate to every line that is written!! Amazing job! I suffer from my own depression and sucide thoughts so I understand it! Awesome job!!!
I love the angst. Yes, I am a typical teenager, so sue me. Anyhoo, I really do like the poem. Very well put.
i love it
i feel it
and if you so as think you can just be gone when you make me stay , you've got another thing comin little mousie!
ash
Much Love
Ashley