Either Way

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Is it enough to wake up everyday

wonder if you'll survive

to sit all day and wonder

what it means to be alive.



When your heart just keeps on pounding

though you wish that you were dead

when your playing back the memories

of everything he said.



When each step takes you far away

from the safety of your bed

and you yearn to see the dripping

of your life coloured in red.



When you tell people your happy

and you wonder why you lie

not one of then will give a damn

after they've said goodbye.



Is it enough to hate existance

or do you think it's wrong

I doubt that i'll care either way

when you finally find i'm gone.


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Afzal Shauq's picture

impressive alot.. and again a good poem with rich idea and heart touching effects... well done

Ashley Alafberg's picture

WOW I can relate to every line that is written!! Amazing job! I suffer from my own depression and sucide thoughts so I understand it! Awesome job!!!

Steven Shepherd's picture

I love the angst. Yes, I am a typical teenager, so sue me. Anyhoo, I really do like the poem. Very well put.

running_with_rabbits's picture

i love it
i feel it

and if you so as think you can just be gone when you make me stay , you've got another thing comin little mousie!

ash


Much Love

Ashley