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Decieved
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closet boxes 2002 This illusion of power
you have over me
is truly convincing
how does it feel to see
that you've fooled yourself
and not just me,
a knowledge corrupt
with a balance that's tipped
as your own undoing
champion to none but yourself
through the answers beneath.
Stare at the surface
in seeking me
of this you fear
risk your realities
of which your decieved,
try to keep this faith
to keep silent is something
of which you don't dare
a life is changed
through the paths you did take.
wow fantastic poem...love the way you did it... hmmmm so impressive and loving... great poem...like it verrrrry much
i kinda like it but its hard to read
partly coz i am sad and had a fight two seconds ago and partly coz you change flow and rhyme too much
but all in all
it just needs a little work
and i love it coz it is so right now for me
ash
Much Love
Ashley
That same old line.
This illusion of power
you have over me
is truly convincing
I enjoyed that line.