Beware The Lady Mare

Beware the 'mare spectator,

who hurts you as you sleep.

She'll mould your dreams to nightmares

and cackle when you weep.


Beware the fear creator,

She'll crush your wracking chest.

She'll torture you 'til morning says

that Death is for the best.


Beware the dream invader,

When you yawn, retire with care.

With every nightmare, she creates

a knot within your hair. 

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nightlight1220's picture

Epiales, "the black dream"...

Epiales, "the black dream"... !!  :-)  nice write!!

...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "


TheShadowKnows's picture


WOW!!! this is totally awesome. havnt seen something this fantastic in a while. makes me think back to a poem i did about "old hag syndrome" but honestly this is way better!!! nice job! very very well done. :)

nelgenielark's picture

That's so nice of you, thank

That's so nice of you, thank you!