I COULD STRETCH MY SKY







i could stretch my sky

until you see the gold

and blue

emerging in your sombre

overcasted view





i could send the swift gazelle

of my forever wandering soul

to sink deep footprints

in your desolated dune





i could sow the seeds

of love to grow bridal bouquets

over the bleak plains  

of your unspoken restless dreams





i could do these and even more ...

but i would rather leave you

to your suffering and your pain

the desert rose blooms not in vain:





it was planted

and it is sustained ...

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Suffering sustains ...

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With moving "i"s, Myra creates enchanting anaphora. And indeed, this is the speech figure that powers the message of; "I COULD STRETCH MY SKY" Yet, it is a live giving metaphor that powers us through dreams and reality of what tribulations are and the truth of our having to go through them with our human weakness; but suatained by the loving care of God Almighty in every unfathomable sense: "the desert rose blooms not in vain..." Some rhyming end lines and enfolding quatrains strikes one with an air of that sustaining breath! Ugonna