BLUE MOON







I saw it when I left ...



the patio was slippery and wet

the shrubs untidy ... overgrown;

the flight

of stairs clattered my cold

and quick footsteps;

clattered the darkness of the night;

clattered my freezing heartbeat

trembling in the Hand

clasping

my tortured breast



where is the light?



what happened to the midnight strolls

the whispers in nocturnal bliss

the safe togetherness

the dreamless rest?



why this tormenting

final stray ...

these shiverings

of sleepless mist?



this moon away

of our moonlit bay?






Author's Notes/Comments: 

Oh, for losing a homecoming ...!

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Ali Saad's picture

Well writtten and beautifully expressed!
Thanks for sharing this one.
Ali

Ali Saad's picture

I enjoyed this one as usual!
You really have a great style.
Ali

poetvg's picture

Good poem :*) .

Ozjan Yeshar's picture

why this tormenting
final stray ...
these shiverings
of sleepless mist?

That line was great. Cheers

Ozjan

onelilartist's picture

This was a very melancholy view of a "dream turned nightmare" scenario. I like your work and will be back to read again. Thank you for posting. It was a treat.

Regards,
Jessica

Ernest Bevans's picture

Such Lovely Melancholy - Ezra Pound would have love this poem As a matter of fact; It reminds me of one of his and also one of my favorites. The Jewel Stairs' Grievance by: Ezra Pound The jewelled steps are already quite white with dew, It is so late that the dew soaks my gauze stockings, And I let down the crystal curtain And watch the moon through the clear autumn.

. Donkerman's picture

Dear Myra Sometimes we have everything - and when we turn and look back - it was just a mirage… Such a sad poem, so well written in the ink of pure emotions. Regards Donkerman