{women}-
open your eyes,
now take a look.
No,really take a look
What do you see.
{man}-
My eyes are open ,
you know what I see,
I see beauty,
I see a love far more beyond my greatest imagination.
I see a scared women,
afraid to give me the love she has to offer.
I see a broken heart.
some1 has torn it apart.
I see tears falling down her cheek
I see my hands wiping the face of someone so sweet.
now what do you see?
{WOMEN}-
I see brown skin
I see brown eyes
I see a man who has so much to give
I see the reason to live
I see my new love
I see my old lover walking away and me not caring
I see you, I see me
I see my new future
which is destind to be.
{man &women}-
We see each other
and no one other.
we see love
and all of that and the above
A very interesting perspective of writing your poem... gives off a clear message, but leaves the reader intruiged with the role playing thing... hopefully you'll keep up the technique