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Sorry I'm rambling now, I will stop. Carry on.
I think the trouble is, we dont have enough sides.
This 2 dimensional object has been flat.
We need more color options and shading
to make it all pop into 3 dimensional reality.
I wanna use more than red or blue.
Purple is cool and all but how about some green and orange?
A little yellow, a little chartreuse a little...
Chartreuse
Is a great pallet paint. Love the ending.
Chartreuse
Have your ever heard Ken Nordine's Colors?
https://youtu.be/5IVuagl9GEY
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Very well thought out and
Very well thought out and clever, but - I imagine - without risking go over the heads of everyone it's intended for. Yes, we need this. We need to allow for people to choose the "wrong" color, too, and have space to figure it out.
I dont know if there are
I dont know if there are wrong colors
sometimes though they clash with eachother
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I'm not sure, either. :)
I'm not sure, either. :)
First, you never ramble. And
First, you never ramble. And the metaphor you use here is strategically and poetically brilliant for the conveyance of the message the poem is meant to present. To your list of colors I would add a deeper blue, metallic blue, (as blue, in the Doppler shifts used by observational astronomy signifies nearness), and a generous helping of delicate lavender. This poem has some very profound meaning in it, and that meaning is deployed in so few lines. This is an excellent poem!
Starward
I thought I were a rambling rose
Thank you very much. And yes, please add those wonderful colors.
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