He writes with words of molten ardour
He touches with honesty
he never apologises
he never agrees
he never denies me
he never breaks my heart
he never berates me
he always applauds
he understands my complexities
he understands support
he never breathes
wow, really liked this. i enjoy the way you use refrences to 'he' in a couple of your poems- i've come across it nowin a couple of poems and i think you do it really well. Initiating mystery and nurturing affection and longing, its intruiging. I loved the last line, and relate to this.
laurenx
Why do I get the feeling this is about a dream person?
Anyway, I liked the listing. In a way, the first two connote a negativity that the rest balance. The final line, is a real killer! It has that classic double meaning, which you trademark so well.
Tim