Total Waste

I drink a couple
ounces of tequila
to numb my thoughts.


I put on a game show
to see if trivia
can slow the tears.


Somehow it helps to
get past the sorrow
in my heart.


Though gloomy,
I'm no longer
a puddle.


Still immovable,
I mark this day
as a total waste.

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With your customary poetic

With your customary poetic skill, you depict a very bleak prospect indeed; and one which, I suspect, happens far too often and far too extensively.  I also think that most people are unable to articulate it---but this poem definitely provides expression of it, and that will help others who are unable to make such an expression.


Starward