You’re the one, who can make me cry;
There are so many others, who still try.
You make me so furious and mad;
And I can’t help, but feel sad.
All I want is to go away;
I can’t wait; I hope it’s today.
You say that you’re always be there,
But I know that you don’t care.
I won’t give in; no I won’t.
I know you don’t love me, no you don’t.
I’m not a little boy,
Who plays with his toy.
You were my hero,
But now you are zero.
To me you are dead,
And blew your last breath.
I want to reach for the knife,
And take out my own life.
You want to be cool,
But you’re nothing but a fool.
Leave me alone,
I’m not you little boy.
I HATE you and I don’t care.
So leave me alone
And stay the fuck away.
Damn..Goodshit
Damn..Goodshit
Hey I really love your writing. It's dark and depressing, and I can totally relate. I especially like this poem because (other than the fact that your a guy and I'm a chick) I can relate and know exactly how you feel. I hate my dad, too. I can't stand him! And can't wait til the day I move out. He's always trying to push me down the "right path" and interfering in my life. We fight everyday. Horribleness in a matchbox...Anyway, Great writing. Hope to see more from ya soon.
Except for the boy part, I feel the same way. I kinda hate my dad because of everything he put me through hwen I was little. There was like a year where I missed him but then he stopped trying to call me or anything and I was his only daughter. It was kinda fucked up. But yea i know what your feeling
I really like this..
Its sad yet true..
~carrie~
keep writting